This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi My names Miriana and im from Sockburn School you might know my cousins Aroha and Jae.I really like how you made a fidget spinner but maybe next time you could either make the lines brighter or the background lighter thanks
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hi Divontae I like how you made a fidget spinner but next time you could make the background not so dark but other than that good job
ReplyDeletethanks jovarn but the background automatically poppet up but thanks for the comment
DeleteHi My names Miriana and im from Sockburn School you might know my cousins Aroha and Jae.I really like how you made a fidget spinner but maybe next time you could either make the lines brighter or the background lighter thanks
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